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回答时间：2024-04-27 10:41
申请澳洲留学个人陈述中不能使用的词有：
数据显示：“从小我一直是……”(From a young age I have always
been···)是去年申请者最常用的开头。
70万学生中有超过1,779名学生在个人陈述中喜欢用“最感兴趣的是”(interested in)或“被…所吸引”(fascinated
by)结尾。
我们梳理了个人陈述中被人用烂的句子，各位准备写申请文书的同学可要留心哟!
1、“自打记事起，我就……”(For as long as I can remember I have···)
2、“我申请这个课程是因为……”(I am applying for this course because···)
3、“我一直对…感兴趣”(I have always been interested in···)
4、“在我一生当中，我一直很享受…”(Throughout my life, I have always enjoyed···)
5、“回顾我的教育经历，我……”(Reflecting on my educational experiences···)
6、“护理专业是一门十分具有挑战性的……”(Nursing is a very challenging and demanding
[career/profession/course)
7、“在学术上，我一直是……”(Academically, I have always been···)
8、“我一直想从事…职业”(I have always wanted to pursue a career in···)
9、“我一直对…充满热情”(I have always been passionate about···)
10、“教育是充满力量的武器，你可以用它来改变世界。”(Education is the most powerful weapon which you
can use to change the world.)
建议：个人陈述一定要个人化。
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