英语高手进来帮忙解决个问题~10

还是熬夜给你整出来吧，不弄好了，总觉得是个事儿。
最后两句没给你写全乎了，因为感觉好的工作和增加就业机会什么的，重复内容较多。
除此而外基本按照你原文的内容顺了一遍，捎带添加了几小句增加点气氛。

另，从所给材料中来看，似乎你去过新加坡吧？
不过因为没了解清楚，不好擅自判断，所以时态方面就基本没敢用过去时和完成时。
如果觉得可以用、而且用了效果会更好的地方，请尽管删改。

别的什么方面未尽之处，还请再行联系好了。

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WHAT IS YOUR IMPRESSION OF SINGAPORE? WHY DO YOU LIKE SINGAPORE?

1．Describe what you see (impression):

In my sight, Singapore is a well-organized country.
在我看来，新加坡是个管理得很好的国家。

It’s very clean and orderly everywhere.
到处都非常干净和有序。

It’s full of green belts and fresh air.
它满是绿化带和清新空气。

There is neither pollution nor noise.
没有污染也没有噪音。

People there are very nice to tourists and foreigners.
那儿的人们对待旅行者和外国人都非常友好。

I really like this.
我很喜欢这些。

Moreover, Singapore is modern, having a number of amazing things.
而且，新加坡很现代化，有许多奇妙的事物。

The most impressive one is its effective technology implementation.
最令我印象深刻的是它有效的科技运作。

It makes the urban development of the city at a level of pinnacle.
它使城市的发展达到了一个顶峰的层次。

I think Singapore is certainly wonderful.
我觉得新加坡真的好棒。

2．Describe how you feel:

I feel quite comfortable and safe when I recall Singapore in mind.
当我想起新加坡的时候会觉得很舒服很安全。

It’s convenient for everything.
什么事情都很方便。

For instance, whatever I take, MRT, buses or taxis, it can give me the efficient service with quality.
举个例子，不管我乘坐什么，地铁也好，公交也好，出租车也好，都能给我高效高质量的服务。

The bus stops are close to home as well.
车站离家也很近。

The most exciting thing is there are many Chinese people living in Singapore.
最激动的是新加坡住着很多华人。

If I go out, I get no difficulty in understanding signboards at all.
要是我出门，认招牌一点儿也不费劲。

It’s easy indeed to live in Singapore.
住在新加坡真是太惬意了。

3．Describe what you experience:

I’d like to say, the people in Singapore make me the best experience.
我想说，新加坡的人们让我体会了最好的感受。

They are warm and friendly.
他们热心而且友好。

They love helping others.
他们喜欢帮助别人。

They always keep smiling to anyone.
他们对谁都是笑盈盈的。

If they serve you, they will supply the best.
他们会提供最好的服务。

Although there are many races in Singapore, they live a harmony life together.
尽管有好多种族住在新加坡，但他们相处融洽。

It’s all attributed to the amazing racial integration, I think.
我觉得这都是消除种族差别待遇的功劳。

It’s quite easy to make fiends all over the country.
整个国家到处都很容易交到朋友。

I find it’s easy to talk to them, because they can talk bilingually.
我发现和他们说话挺容易，因为他们能说双语。

I really love Singapore people much.
我真是太喜欢新加坡人了。

4．Describe what you learn about Singapore:

I’ve learnt there are so many world-class places of interests in Singapore.
我知道新加坡有好多世界级的观光地。

Some of them are definitely perfect scenic spots.
其中有些绝对是完美的景胜。

There are also lots of great shopping centres and super-modern book shops, which attract my attention much.
还有许多大型购物中心和超现代的书店，也都很吸引我。

They prepare many choices and brands for customers.
它们有许多品牌可供顾客选择。

No fakes, no counterfeits, all is e to the great respect for intellectual properties.
因为知识产权在新加坡受到很高的尊重，所以没假货，也没水货。

And prices are very competitive.
价格非常有竞争力。

That is marvelous.
真是妙极了。

5．Why choose Singapore/going abroad for studies?

Singapore is a conctive environment for studies and learning English.
新加坡是个学习英语和搞研究的好环境。

It’s also helpful to pick up other personal skills.
它对于获得其它的个人技能也很有帮助。

Besides, I can learn different cultures and how to assimilate into them.
此外，我还可以了解不同的文化，以及如何与之融合。

I of course can make many Singapore friends as well, which may improve my interpersonal relationship skills.
我还可以交许多新加坡朋友，来提高我的人际交往能力。

At the same time, I probably get my analytical skills promoted and my perception of foreign countries enhanced.
同时，我也能提高我的分析能力和对其它国家的感知能力。

I think all of these are necessary for I’m going to live an independent life and take care of myself.
我觉得这些对我来说都是必要的，因为我打算过独立的生活，照顾好自己。

Only if I do so, will I have a better job and create more promotion opportunities.
只有这样，我才能获得比较好的工作，创造更多晋升的机会。

Singapore is just the very city for me to make my dreams come true.
新加坡正是这样一个地方，让我的梦想变为现实。

你对此有何印象新加坡？为什么你喜欢新加坡？
描述您所看到的（印象） ：漂亮，干净，超现代的， oraerly ?，没有污染，有效的技术实施，绿化带，城市发展在其巅峰
描述你的感受：舒适，安全，方便（侧重于运输，例如：地铁，巴士，的士→高效率和方便） ，在离家较近的，许多华人周围，没有很难理解招牌
描述您的经验：人民（ 有好的 ，温暖，有益的，面带微笑，良好的服务，很多场比赛，令人惊讶的种族融合，容易交朋友，很容易交谈，双语）
描述您了解新加坡：许多世界级的地方利益，许多伟大的购物中心，很多超现代的书店 ，许多选择和品牌，价格非常有竞争力
非常尊重知识产权正版正货无假冒
为什么选择新加坡/出国学习？
有利的环境，研究和学习英语
有利的环境拿起其他个人技能
可以了解不同的文化，以及如何融入它
可以使许多新加坡朋友
可以改善我的人际关系技巧
学会独立照顾自己
更广泛地接触到外国媒体/出版
提高我的分析技能，增强我国的看法外国
更好的就业机会未来+提高我国的就业机会
更好的薪金/工资等级和晋升机会

很好哇 又几个单词拼错了describe还有bookshops

what is your impression of Singapore?why do you like singapore?
describe what you see(impression):

answer:
In my impression , singapore is a nice,clean,ultra-modern country which has effective technology implementation,green belts,urban development at its pinnacle without any pollution.

describe how you feel :

answer:
in singapore,i feel comfortable and safe,you can get any where conveniently with efficient transportation.there are many chinese around ,you have no difficulty in understanding signboards

describe what is you experience :
answer:
people in singapore are friendly,warm always with smiling on their faces who are easy to make friends with.you can get good service in shops.

describe what you learn about Singapore:
answer :
there are many world-class places of interests,many great shopping centres ,many ultra-modern booksshops,many brands whose prices are very competitive.therefore, i am
great respect to their intellectual properties --No fakes No counterfeits

why choose Singapore/going abroad for studies?
answer:
first, singapore has a concive environment for studies and learning English with concive environment to pick up other personal skills.i can learn a different culture and get to know how to assimilate into it .
second, i can make many Singaporean friends which can improve my interpersonal relationship skills
learn to be independent and take care of myself.
third, i can get wider exposure to foreign media,publications and so on.
in singapore,better jobs prospective enhance my employment opportunities and i can have promotion opportunities .that is all.

词汇简单，效果不错，好

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