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The cat raises the mouse
Some people buy a cat, calls it to safeguard the grain well, seized to the mouse for the reward. several days, the tabby cat has not grasped the mouse, each time seized to the mouse, all could obtain a fish. This day, the tabby cat seizes a small mouse, the master loses the fish bone gives it, said: " The big mouse spoils the grain many, the small mouse spoils the grain are few, seizes ten small mice also not to compare seizes half big mouse's contribution. Rewards according to merit, seizes this only and has not held the mouse to be same, you only can eat this!" Next day, also some small mouse steals the grain. The tabby cat thought that, seized it not to be really of use, then stored in the grain has raised it, and so on the mouse ate fat also was big, the big tabby cat only then seizes sees the master, said: " This fellow has eaten half grain bin sub- grain!" The master sees the mouse also to have to be bigger than, grain like this many the tabby cat which spoils, is extremely happy, has enjoyed its two big carps immediately, and encourages it to say: "Your contribution too has been big, hoped you seize more such mice to come!" "Only looked the superficial result, does not speak the actual effect the fool", the tabby cat secretly says with a smile, "how much grain can you have to raise the mouse to me?"

我只看了第一句话
A man buy a cat, in order to watch the cereal, if it can catch a mouse, it would be get a reward
buy显然时态不对，要用一般过去时.
一句话有多分句，至少要加个连词and
一句话中主语不统一，且it指代不明。
Once upon a time，a man bought a cat to guard the cereal well, and he promised to reward it for catching mice.

haha.中文思维太厉害了．
A man bought a cat to catch cereals. If the cat can catch a mouse, it would be get a reward.

The cat raises the mouse
Some people buy a cat, calls it to safeguard the grain well, seized to the mouse for the reward. several days, the tabby cat has not grasped the mouse, each time seized to the mouse, all could obtain a fish. This day, the tabby cat seizes a small mouse, the master loses the fish bone gives it, said: " The big mouse spoils the grain many, the small mouse spoils the grain are few, seizes ten small mice also not to compare seizes half big mouse's contribution. Rewards according to merit, seizes this only and has not held the mouse to be same, you only can eat this!" Next day, also some small mouse steals the grain. The tabby cat thought that, seized it not to be really of use, then stored in the grain has raised it, and so on the mouse ate fat also was big, the big tabby cat only then seizes sees the master, said: " This fellow has eaten half grain bin sub- grain!" The master sees the mouse also to have to be bigger than, grain like this many the tabby cat which spoils, is extremely happy, has enjoyed its two big carps immediately, and encourages it to say: "Your contribution too has been big, hoped you seize more such mice to come!" "Only looked the superficial result, does not speak the actual effect the fool", the tabby cat secretly says with a smile, "how much grain can you have to raise the mouse to me?"

我只看了第一句话
A man buy a cat, in order to watch the cereal, if it can catch a mouse, it would be get a reward
buy显然时态不对，要用一般过去时.
一句话有多分句，至少要加个连词and
一句话中主语不统一，且it指代不明。
Once upon a time，a man bought a cat to guard the cereal well, and he promised to reward it for catching mice.

haha.中文思维太厉害了．
A man bought a cat to catch cereals. If the cat can catch a mouse, it would be get a reward.

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